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Post by DagonXIII on Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:16 pm

Short Version: All you need to know
Was in the service of the Silver Prince before being captured and counter brainwashed by a solar and Pall's lunar mate. Is hiding and studying MA in Naraka. Is not seeking redemption so much as seeking to become a great martial artist on his own.

Moderately Long Version: TLDR
As a mortal, he was known as BlackBear the boxer for his great size and his thick black beard. However as he continued to box, he began to admire more and more the Martial Arts of the Immaculate Monks. Resolving to join the order and study under them, he set sail to the blessed isle but his boat was destroyed by Pirates and he was left floating on debris. He heard the voice of a Deathlord offering to save his life, and in desperation and anger he agreed.
The Mask of Winters was Bear's patron, and he was given a mentor named of Dissonance by Silence, a Midnight caste, along with a fellow recruit named Black Fox with Emerald Eyes, a day caste. A year or so past in the courts of the underworld, then came that one mission. The plan ran afoul a traveling Solar, Shattered Mountain, who killed Silence and captured Bear, now Pall, when he stood to fight.
Bear awoke hanging upside down from a tree in the east near Halta. Over the next month the Solar and, oddly, Pall's Lunar mate, a changing moon named Silver Monkey, worked to counter the Underworld's brainwashing with a bit of their own. Eventually, Fox found him and freed him from their hold but Pall did not want to return to the underworld, instead wishing to study Martial Arts on his own. They fought and Pall let Fox escape.
His Lunar mate told him of a city that held the tomb of his first age son as well as an extensive library of Solar Martial Arts. So Pall headed to Naraka.

Important Bullet Points:
    1. Patron was Mask of Winters
    2. Has active Rival who wants him returned to Underworld
    3. Powerful Mentor who wants him to become a Solar
    4. Monkey Totem Lunar Mate who lives and operates out of Halta


Black Fox with Emerald Eyes:
I'll get something more up soon.
Essentially they were rivals then friends then... But she hasn't admitted it yet. She wants him back in the underworld but thinks she is doing it because 'it will save the trouble of training a new deathknight if he come with me.' However, actually forced to kill him or leave, she will leave. Sadly, if she ever did find out she would probably cut it out of her heart and on the next occasion kill Pall.
Pall knows he loves her; He knew when he could not kill her before. Still, salvation and study come first. He must cure the rot in his heart before turning to save his friend.


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Re: Iron Staff Wrapped in Pall

Post by DagonXIII on Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:16 pm

Caste: Dusk
Motivation: Become Creation's Greatest Martial Artist
Motivation: Luv, truew luv. (Fox)
Attributes:
Strength 4, Dexterity 4, Stamina 3,
Charisma 2, Manipulation 2, Appearance 3,
Perception 3, Intelligence 2, Wits 4
Abilities:
*Archery 1, *Martial Arts 5 (N-Tag 3,) *Melee 3, *Thrown 0, *War 2,
*Integrity 3, Performance 0, Presence 2, *Resistance 4 (Poisons 2,) Survival 1,
Craft 0, Investigation 0, Lore 1, Medicine 0, Occult 1,
*Athletics 4, *Awareness 3 (Combat 3,) *Dodge 4 (Single Foe 2,) Larceny 0, Stealth 3,
Bureaucracy 0, Linguistics 2, Ride 0, Sail 0, Socialize 1
Virtues:
Compassion 3, Conviction 2, Temperance 2, Valor 4
Essence:2 WP 10
Peripheral: 16 Personal: 34
DV: 6 (7) MDV: 7 JC: 10
Soak: 7/7 (15/15)

Merits and Flaws:
True Love
Nemesis - 3
Oathbound - 5 (Eat only rice and water, abstain from drugs and sex)

Weapons:
Wrack-Staff: 4/17 /8L,16B (10L,18B)/8/2 M(P)
Fists: 5/19/5B (9B)/10/3 N
Clinch: 5/18/5B (11B)/1 N,P,C

Charms:
Abyssal Essence Triumphant
Flitting Shadow Form (168 Abyss)
Uncanny Impulse Evasion
Flickering Wisp Evasion
Blade Summoning Gesture (pg: 129)
Void Sheath Technique
Spirit Hardened Frame (147)
Injury Absorbing Discipline
Resilient Corpse Body (18 GMHUS)
Corpse Might Surge (165 Abyss)
Falling Scythe Attack (166)
Undying Stagnation Defense
Fist of Iron Technique
Sledgehammer Fist Punch
Dragon Coil Technique
Solar Hero Form
Ox-Stunning Blow
Day and Night Kata ( 34 GMHUS )
Spirit Over Clouds Approach
Shining Sun Form

Backgrounds:
Artifact 2 (Soulsteel Wrackstaff)
Artifact 2 (Skin Mount Amulet)
Artifact 1 (Steelsilk Armor)
Manse 4 (7 Leaping Dragons Stone)
Manse 1 (Gem of Flying Heart)
Mentor 2 (Zenith Wutai Monk)
Ally 3 (Changing Moon Lunar Mate)
Ally 1 (Ghost Living in Manse)
Resources 2 (Various, but from fighting)


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Re: Iron Staff Wrapped in Pall

Post by DagonXIII on Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:12 pm

And because I found all that very hard to look at, here's a puppy.
Dawww... puppy.


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Re: Iron Staff Wrapped in Pall

Post by AlaskanWyvern on Sat Jul 09, 2011 1:38 am

Was your Lunar mate in the West? He and I might have met, which would give us a reason to meet up.
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Post by DagonXIII on Sat Jul 09, 2011 11:10 am

I'm thinking my character was originally from harborhead, and then as a servant to the silver prince he would have operated in the west. So yes, I think my Lunar Mate must have been in the West for a period of Time. I should note here that his current incarnation is male.

It is starting to sound like He has long term Abyssal recovery and reintegration plans. I might reorganize some points to represent that...

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Re: Iron Staff Wrapped in Pall

Post by AlaskanWyvern on Sat Jul 09, 2011 2:07 pm

Carl and I will be after that too.
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Re: Iron Staff Wrapped in Pall

Post by eagle788 on Sat Jul 09, 2011 4:27 pm

yep
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Re: Iron Staff Wrapped in Pall

Post by DagonXIII on Sat Jul 09, 2011 4:54 pm

Edit: Read up a bit, and switched patron to Mask.

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Re: Iron Staff Wrapped in Pall

Post by DagonXIII on Sat Jul 09, 2011 5:33 pm

4 Dot Manse:
Central Control 2
Password Activation 1
Network Node 1
Halo of Hesieh 2
Archive 2
    - Solar Hero Style
    - Uses Halo of Hesiesh to Create Holograms
Total 8


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Re: Iron Staff Wrapped in Pall

Post by CodexGigas on Sat Jul 09, 2011 8:22 pm

Didn't you want your manse to have an MA archive?
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Re: Iron Staff Wrapped in Pall

Post by DagonXIII on Sat Jul 09, 2011 8:28 pm

Yah, I did... Edited out the servitor force.

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Post by CodexGigas on Mon Jul 11, 2011 1:29 am

Forgot to approve your backstory earlier. Take 5xp.
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Re: Iron Staff Wrapped in Pall

Post by DagonXIII on Mon Jul 11, 2011 1:13 pm

One thing I forgot to mention. I am using the Jon Chung solar hero style as found here: http://fixalted.bazzalisk.org/index.php?title=Jon_Chung's_Solar_Hero_Style_Revision

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Post by CodexGigas on Mon Jul 11, 2011 3:10 pm

Kk. I approve of anything Chung writes. Lemme add that to houserules.
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Post by AlaskanWyvern on Mon Jul 11, 2011 4:57 pm

What about Revlid?
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Re: Iron Staff Wrapped in Pall

Post by CodexGigas on Mon Jul 11, 2011 5:33 pm

All of his Lunar fixes and his familiar fix are go, if you want any of his Charms, ask me first. He's turned out a few wonky ones.
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Post by CodexGigas on Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:52 pm

Don't forget Pall's 5 bonus XP for turning in your character sheet first.
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Post by AlaskanWyvern on Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:49 pm

Also, I forgot if we already knew Pall yet.
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Post by eagle788 on Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:50 pm

we need to for me to have my gladestalker stone
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Re: Iron Staff Wrapped in Pall

Post by DagonXIII on Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:06 pm

I've been assuming that we are effectively a circle. We have similar motivations, and Shadow and I must have been communicating. I was actually planning on letting you guys eat my rice.

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Post by AlaskanWyvern on Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:10 pm

Yeah, I looked at Carl's backstory afterwards, and realized we should be together, at least in some respect.

I'll bring fish...
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Post by DagonXIII on Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:25 pm

On a seperate issue. Can I take Oath-Bound for 3 more background points? It would be three fold: Eat only Rice and drink only water and Abstain from drugs, alcohol and sex. I would also like Nemesis (Fox) for 3 points. I would buy true love (also Fox) for 5 points and compassion 3

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Post by CodexGigas on Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:32 pm

That would be a Greater Oath, so it would be 5 pts I think. Approved.
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Post by DagonXIII on Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:38 am

I added a bit about Fox and Pall's relationship. I spending the 8 BP on True Love - 5, Compassion 3 - 1, Ling 2 - 1 and Integrity 3 -1

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